Question

Oi gente eu tenho uma prova oral de inglês amanha e queria que alguém corrigisse meu texto por favor:

Different from my last vacation, in this next vacation I want to travel, because in my last one I didn't anything interesting.
My next vacation is going to start in december. But I don't know when it'll finish, because I'm going to sinish my highschool in this year and I'm not sure when I'll start the college or to work.
I'll spend my vacation with my family, but I'll also hang out with my friends. I'm gointo to travel to the beach with my brother, my sister-in-law and my best friend.
In january I'll intend to take a graduation trip with my friends from school and I guess that we go to "Ubatuba".
I want to use this vacation to stay home and rest too, maybe watch some movies and read some book.

Obg <3

Answer 1

Differently from my last vacation, I want to travel in this next vacation because in my last one I didn't do anything interesting.
[ 1 - Utilizar o "different" era incorreto, pois você está se referindo a forma como as férias vão ser e não atribuindo algo ao substantivo "vacation".
2 - Atenção a ordem de uma frase .
3 - Cuidado para não confudir o verbo auxiliar 'do' e suas variações com o verbo principal 'do' e sua variações.]

***A forma que você escreveu esse primeiro parágrafo me parece um pouco repetitivo. Uma alternativa pra ele seria:
Differently from my last vacation, which I didn't do anything interesting, I want to travel in this next one.



My next vacation is going to start in December, which is the same month that I am going to be graduated in highschool, and I'm still not sure when I'll start the college or to work.

[ 1 - Não esqueça de pôr letra maiúscula nos meses.]



I'll spend my vacation with my family, but I'll also hang out with my friends. I'm going to travel to the beach with my brother, my sister-in-law and my best friend.
I intend to make a graduation trip with my friends from school in January and I guess that we will go to Ubatuba.



I also want to spend this vacation staying home and resting, maybe watching some movies and reading some book.