Inglês, perguntado por camille280703, 11 meses atrás

alguém por favor corrigi os erros pra mim - on my last vacations I stayed a week watching movies and series, also went to my father's house he took me to the movies we bought popcorn and after we finished watching I went back home and went with my mother and my brother to Minas to visit my relatives when we got there we went to some relatives' house and it was a very nice day the other day we visited some places and ate a lot I also went to see my cousins and there was a party that was very good we spent a few more weeks and I went back home a few weeks back to school my mother and I went to buy my supplies and my brother bought everything and we returned home I enjoyed the rest of my vacation to meet some friends and talk, for me it was a great vacation and I intend to repeat this year.

camille280703: Por isso pedi ajuda, se não pode ajudá só fica quieto, obg

Usuário anônimo: *Ajudar

Usuário anônimo: Estou ajudando. Comece usando vírgulas e pontos finais.

camille280703: Eu estou mais preocupada com a tradução

Usuário anônimo: Você quer essa tranqueira seja traduzida ou corrigida?

Usuário anônimo: *quer que

camille280703: corrigida porém só as palavras

Usuário anônimo: Não dá para corrigir só as palavras sem se importar com a semântica nem com a gramática.

camille280703: mas se as palavras estiverem corretas e bem mais fácil colocar pontuação

Usuário anônimo: Meu deus, você não consegue entender que não dá só para corrigir as palavras sem considerar todo o resto? As palavras do seu texto parecem estar okay na grafia, mas juntas muitas não fazem sentido nem formam coisas gramaticais. Entende?

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Respondido por brunaisotton7

... I also went to my father´s house...he took me to the movies and we bought popcorn... and when we finidhed watching, we went back home. After a few days, I went to Minas Gerais with my mother and my brother to visit my relatives. We stayed at my relative´s house and it was a very nice day. Then, we visited some places and ate a lot. We also met my cousins. Besides, we went to very good party. After a few weeks, we went back home, relax a little bit. And my mom and I bought my school´s supplies, I love it. I spent the rest of my vacation meeting and talking to my friends. I think it was the best vacation in/on my life, I intent to repeat this year.