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my name is Livia and i am from brazil. i live rio de Janeiro. i have two sisters and two brothers.
my father is police officer and my mother is a teacher.
my sister Jennifer have twenty-five years old, she likes swimming in beach, her favorite activity is eat Japanese food.

my sister Julianna have twenty-seven years old. her favorite activity is help the people, she is a doctor. she is a God person. I love her! Julianna is married with Diego. Diego's a crazy man. then the dog, her name is Fini. them lives in tijuca
my mom's love of my life, sometimes she's very boring, her favorite color is pink because she thinks delicate and loving. loves driving her white car.

My two brothers, Their names are Pedro and Roberto.
Pedro is a little boy. he is my babe, he studying in Raposo, likes play the videogame, talk talk him friends, Pedro fight jujitsu every day of weekend at six o'clock.
my brother Roberto is a Extroverted boy, he likes run, ride a bike, play soccer. he play soccer every Saturday of month, He likes to dance funk and to play sports.

alguém pode corrigir os erros?​

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My name is Livia and I'm from Brazil. I live in Rio de Janeiro I have two sisters and two brothers.

My father is a cop and my mother is a teacher.

my sister Jennifer is twenty-five years old, she likes to swim on the beach, her favorite activity is to eat Japanese food.

my sister Julianna is twenty-seven years old. her favorite activity is helping people, she's a doctor. she is a person of God. I love her! Julianna is married to Diego. Diego is a crazy man. She has a dog, his name is Fini. They live in Tijuca.

My mother's love of my life, sometimes she is very boring, her favorite color is pink because she thinks delicate and loving. loves driving his white car.

I have two brothers, their names are Pedro and Roberto.

Pedro is a little boy. he is my love, he studies in Raposo, likes to play video games, speaks of friends, Pedro fights jiu-jitsu every day of the weekend at six o'clock.

My brother Roberto is an extrovert boy, he likes to run, ride a bike, play football. he plays soccer every Saturday of the month, likes to dance funk and play sports.