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Hi my name is Becca and i going to talk about Natal and the main reasons to visit the city.

Natal, capital of Rio Grande do Norte was founded in 1599 at shores of Rio Potengi and have 817.590 of peoples.
Natal is known for yours natural beauties, pretty beaches, dunas, lagoons and coconut trees.
Natal is known too how Cidade do Sol, because the sun shine while all the year and rest only in the rainy periods between march and july. The city has one of the most beautiful coastlines in Brazil, and a welcoming peoples that welcome the visitors with open Arms.

Now i going to talk about the 6 main reasons to visit the city.
First: beaches, theres not how talk about Natal, without quote variety of beaches, many of them referenced how the most beautifuls of Brazil.
second: The biggest cashew tree of the world, and even find in the Guinesbook how the biggest of the world.
Third: The dunas of Natal
Fourth: Rua Chile, a Natal what don’t sleep, who seeks to have fun after visiting the beaches, dunas and others attractions, must know the Rua Chile.
Fifith: the wonderful Potiguar cuisine, other reason of much importance to get to know Natal is your gastronomic aspect.
And finally
Sixth: unique experiences in Natal, beaches and dunas already are attractive, there are still natural pools, even allowing a coral dive- and a variety of the most beautiful lakes.

Bye!




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Answer 1

Está tudo certo, parabéns!