Question

hello all my name and victor manuel
mendes I am thirteen years old I live in
Taguatinga tocantins I study at the state
school Justino de Almeida and I'm good
my favorite subject and Portuguese ! can
not forget to say that I'm a fan of games
and technology, my life is great because 1
do everything good at 6 am I go to school
half a day I go to lunch and play some free
fire type games one afternoon I have to go
to work at my aunt's shop I leave the store
at 6 pm I talk a little about my family my
mother she works in the civil police
station my father lives in the bay in a city
called luis eduardo magalhaes he and
camionero in luis Eduardo lives my two
brother luis otavio and luis felipe eem
taguatiga lives my sister is called helena
my grandmother my grandmother jacy my
Tam Maria Jose Cardoso, my other part of
my parental family lives my avo jose
gomes better known as ze bare mi vo
cleucide she is a schoolteacher who I
study from time to time the fight with me
that read much more this was a piece of
my life bye bye





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Answer 1

Hello everyone!

My name is Victor Manuel Mendes and I'm thirteen years old. I live in Taguatinga, Tocantins and I study at the state school Justino de Almeida. I'm a good student my favorite matter is Portuguese!

I can't forget to say how I'm a big fan of games

and technology. I live a great life because everything I do is good on my routine I go to school at 6 am and at midday, I go to lunch and play some games like free fire. After I've gonna work at my aunt's shop and I just leave the store at 6 pm.  

Now let's gonna talk a little about my family, my  mother works at the Civil Police  Station my father lives in the bay in a city  called Luis Eduardo Magalhaes he and  Camionero, in Luis Eduardo, lives my two

brothers Luis Otavio and Luis Felipe in  Taguatiga lives my sister Helena, my grandmother Jacy my Tam Maria Jose Cardoso. My another part of my parental family is my grandfather Jose Gomes know as Ze Bare and my grandmother  Cleucide she's a teacher in the  school that I

study. She fights with me  time to time, to me read more, but this is another part of  my days.  Bye Bye

P.s: a parte que vc falava quem morava na casa de quem eu não entendi direito. E tbm quando vc tiver um texto só pra corrigir gramatica e pontuação usa o grammarly ;-)