Question

Boa Noite,se possível gostaria que algum professor de Inglês corrigisse esta redação sobre meu futuro,tenho que apresenta-la amanhã!!!
Obrigada desde Já.
In 2066 I will have 66 years old, I will be a very different person that I am now, Talking about my own future I might have a big family but I don’t know how many children I will have. The only thing I know now is my family will be a very special family and we will love each other. I may be a teacher or a psychologist .If I have money I will live in USA with my family, I will have a happy life and I will have a beautiful husband. My husband will help me and I will help him. We will be more than wife and husband: we will be best friends, and we will live forever together. I will have many hobbies like read, travel, go out with friends and take pictures. I may have a car for go out with my family but even If I don’t have I will keep using bus or subway. I love dogs so I will have a lot of them and they may live with me inside our home. I will be short and skinny and I may have a long hair and I will do exercises every day.

Answer 1

Bem, não sou professor, mas vou corrigir algumas coisas simples...

1 - The only thing I know is THAT my family will be a very special family and we will love each other.

2 - I may have a car TO go out with my family, but even if I don't have I will keep using the bus or subway.