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Once upon a time there was a beautiful queen that she loved the animals and everything about the nature and because of that her castle seems to be a florest. One day she dicided to convince her husband to adopt another puppy. So there went her try to explain her husband her will to have another dog but when she told to him he said to her need to be more mature because she is not a down to earth person. Always she wanna a new pet she have her head in the clouds and she doesn't think about the spending that they'll have many needs. But she couldn't care less about he told to her and she dicided to go a dog kennel, she thought to herself that she'll do whatever it takes to create the dog. When she arrived there she fall in love with a white puppy that right away she had the sure that it'll be her new dog. So after the red tape as usual. She caught the puppy and put to get in into the car in the part of the back and she back to her castle but she can't imagine what was about to happen. She was driving as usual so she imagined that there was a shortcut to come back. It was she did but out of the blue she saw her puppy was disappear and to make things worse she doesn't notice that there was a broken bridge in her front she try to do something but it already late but something very awesome happen. Out of the blue whe she was falling someone appear and push her car to the up and by coincidence that person was her dog it calls super dog. So the super dog was the best thing she did in her whole life because after all she have a very different dog that no one have it. And her husband got so surprised when she told to him all the story. She thought he'd disagree about all but he had dare to aks if they can adopt another dog and it was they did and they had a happy ending with her new family dogs.
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Once upon a time there was a beautiful queen. she loved animals and everything about the nature, and because of that her castle seemed to be a forest. One day she decided to convince her husband to adopt another puppy. So there went her try to explain to her husband she wishes to have another dog, but when she told him he said she needed to be more mature because she’s not a down to earth person. She always wants a new pet but has her head in the clouds and she doesn't think about they'll have many needs. But she couldn't care less about what he told her, and dicided to create a dog kennel, and thought to herself that she'll do whatever it takes to have a dog. When she arrived there she fell in love with a white puppy, and right away she was sure that it would be hers. She bought the puppy and put it in the back of the car and she went back to her castle but she couldn’t imagine what was about to happen. She was driving as usual, so she imagined that there was a shortcut to come back. So she did, but of the blue she saw her puppy disappeared and to make things worse she didn’t notice that there was a broken bridge ahead. she tried to do something, but it was too late. Then something very awesome happened. Out of the blue whe she was falling someone appear and pushed her car up and by coincidence that person was her dog, it was a super dog. So the super dog was the best thing that happened on her whole life because, after all, she had a very different dog that no one else had. And her husband got so surprised when she told him all that happened. She thought he'd disagree about it, but even still she dared to aks if they can adopt another dog, and so they did. And she lived happily ever after with her family and dogs.
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Once upon a time there was a beautiful queen. she loved animals and everything about the nature, and because of that her castle seemed to be a forest. One day she decided to convince her husband to adopt another puppy. So there went her try to explain to her husband she wishes to have another dog, but when she told him he said she needed to be more mature because she’s not a down to earth person. She always wants a new pet but has her head in the clouds and she doesn't think about they'll have many needs. But she couldn't care less about what he told her, and dicided to create a dog kennel, and thought to herself that she'll do whatever it takes to have a dog. When she arrived there she fell in love with a white puppy, and right away she was sure that it would be hers. She bought the puppy and put it in the back of the car and she went back to her castle but she couldn’t imagine what was about to happen. She was driving as usual, so she imagined that there was a shortcut to come back. So she did, but of the blue she saw her puppy disappeared and to make things worse she didn’t notice that there was a broken bridge ahead. she tried to do something, but it was too late. Then something very awesome happened. Out of the blue whe she was falling someone appear and pushed her car up and by coincidence that person was her dog, it was a super dog. So the super dog was the best thing that happened on her whole life because, after all, she had a very different dog that no one else had. And her husband got so surprised when she told him all that happened. She thought he'd disagree about it, but even still she dared to aks if they can adopt another dog, and so they did. And she lived happily ever after with her family and dogs.
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