Question

Tem algum erro neste texto? as respostas foram feita em cima das seguintes perguntas : What your favorite movie? - Who are the main characteres? - When and where does movie happen? - What happens in the story? - Are the actors good in the movie? - Do you like the movie? Why or why not?

Text:
My favorite movie is “Up”, the type of movie is action. Yours mains characters are Russel, Carl Fredricksen, Dugg and “Narceja”.
This movie happen in a forest of South America.
Carl Fredricksen is a salesman of balloons what went to a forest in the South America for find “The Paradise of Waterfalls”, live a series of adventures with Dugg (the dog), Kevin (Narceja) and Russel (the boy).
The actors are amazing! My favorite actor in this movie is Jordan Nagai, he does voice of Russel in this movie.
I don’t like this movie, I love so much this movie, because has very adventures, danger and emotions.

Answer 1

Primeira resposta mude a parte de "the type" até "action" para "it is an action movie"

Segunda resposta mude para "the movie takes place in a forest located in South america."

Terceira resposta : "is a salesman THAT went to a forest......" "To a forest in south america TO find...." E mude o"live a series of aventures" para " and end up in series of adventures" e o resto...

Quarta resposta:"he does THE voice of russel in this movie"

Quinta resposta pode mudar para: i dont just like this movie,i love it!! Because it has lots of adventures,dangers and the character goes trough lots of emotions.