Question

reescreva o texto no passado:
My name is Mary and I am not writing from Washington, i am writing from Londom now,
it is a beautiful morning and the sun is shining, it is not raining now. It is half past
eleven and i am standing in front of Buckinghan palace, the Queen's home in London.
There are a lot of tourists here, from all over the world. We are watching the great
show. They are changing the guard. The band is playing and the soldiers are
marching. I am taking a picture.

Answer 1

My name is Mary and I was not writing from Washington, I was writing from London. It was a beautiful morning and the sun was shining, it was not raining at that day. It was half past eleven and I was standing in front of Buckinghan Palace, the Queen's home in London. There were a lot of tourists here, from all over the world. We were watching the great show. They were changing the guard. The band was playing and the soldiers were marching. I was taking a picture.

P.s.: eu só não mudei o is por was no início "My name is Mary" porque acredito que o nome dela não mudou. E mudei o "now" por "at that day" pra fazer mais sentido.

Answer 2

Resposta:

My name is Mary and I was not writing from Washington, I was writing from London. It was a beautiful morning and the sun was shining, it was not raining at that day. It was half past eleven and I was standing in front of Buckinghan Palace, the Queen's home in London. There were a lot of tourists here, from all over the world. We were watching the great show. They were changing the guard. The band was playing and the soldiers were marching. I was taking a picture