Question

Queria saber se este texto em inglês está correto:
On Sunday,I Was at my grandparent`s house because we were going to my cousin`s engagement party at noon,we left her house at 9:00 p.m and arrived at the parlor at noon, and stayed there until 4:00pm, on the way back from the party, my grandfather brought me home, so i did my homework for monday, and watched Tv until later, at 11:00 i went to bed.

Answer 1

Pra mim, ficaria melhor se você colocasse "until I get Sleepy" que seria algo como até eu ficar com sono.
Mas de resto tá tudo bem

Answer 2

tudo que você escreveu está certo