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Preciso de um texto de pelo menos 3 minutos, ja fiz um mas nao deu nem 1:30...Meu texto é: Hobby its something you like to do. Since practice yoga, until, collecting cards, for exemple. There are many hobbys, of the most varied kinds. Some of them are: drawing, collecting something, watching movies, traveling, solving crosswords puzzles, going window-shopping and surfing the net. My father's hobby is collecting coins and some bank notes too!And he has a lot of them! my cousin's hobby is playing video games, my friend's hobby is using her cellphone. I like to paint, but, I can't do it! The my hobby is whatching series. I started it when my father subscribe Netflix. I spend hours doing it! I do it ever i can. And i love it so much!

Answer 1

Não completei seu texto, mas corrigi alguns erros, espero que ajude.
Para completar, sugiro falar sobre alguns hobbies que você um dia gostaria de praticar e sobre porquê praticar hobbies é bom e/ou importante. :)

Hobby is something you like to do. From practicing yoga to collecting cards, for example. There are many kinds of hobbies. Some of them are: drawing, collecting things, watching movies, traveling, solving crosswords puzzles, going window-shopping and surfing the net. My father's hobby is collecting coins and some bank notes too!And he has a lot of them! My cousin's hobby is playing video games, my friend's hobby is using her cellphone. I like to paint, but I'm not good at it. One of my hobbies is watching TV series. I started it when my father subscribed to Netflix. I spend hours doing it! I do it every time I can. And I love it so much!