Question

Podem me dizer o que acham da minha resenha de 1984 e se tem algo errado no texto?

1984 is a dystopian book written by George Orwell. George was a journalist, critic and a novelist and his main books are Animal Farm, 1984 and Homage to Catalonia. He published 1984 in 1949 as a form to critic the totalitarian governments around the world and to scare people about future.
The book shows the problems of a totalitarian government. Every people are watched by telescreens and they have to love Big Brother, a fictional figure created to control the masses. If you are against the party, they will find you, make a brainwash and torture you. The population thoughts are controlled and to make people don’t revolt against the government, the party teaches to children in the school to report their parents and they use the telescreens to watch people in their homes. Phrases like “freedom is slavery” are used to control the population. There are also the Newspeak, it is a new dictionary with less words. The party wants to create this new language to decrease the critical sense, because this would decrease the chances of opposition. The protagonist is Winston Smith. He works in the ministry of true, a place where the news and old reports ae modified to benefit the government. Winston lives in Oceania a continent that constantly battle against Eurasia. He meets Julia, a member of Inner party, and they start to love each other. Winston and Julia face the totalitarian government, because of love.
Nineteen Eighty-four is the “opposite” of Brave New World. 1984 shows the repressive manner that the population are controlled in a totalitarian government. Already the Brave New World, shows how people can be controlled peacefully. But, both portray the happiness. The two governments try to make the population happy in two different manners, because everyone wants to be happy, but this may “blind” the people. Brave New World uses “soma”, a drug, and 1984 uses Big Brother.
I really recommend 1984, because this book shows that the freedom is better than a secure, rich and happy life. An example is the love. People can’t love, because the party forbid it, because, according to them, love make people have bad feelings against the government.

Answer 1

Achei a resenha muito boa, fiquei até interessada em ler o livro. Em relação a erros ortográficos o único que consegui identificar é que em uma parte está escrito ae em vez de are: "He works in the ministry of true, a place where the news and old reports ae modified to benefit the government.".