Question

Imagine you're on holiday now
Hi Sarah,

I'm in Santa Catarina now, I just came from Beto Carrero with my parents. we are packing now to take a walk in Foz do Iguaçu, I am very excited.
I love the people here, the food and how interesting the shops are, did you know that there is no sign here and cars stop when there are people? Today the weather is very good, it is hot and windy, but the weather forecast says that on the weekend it will rain and make it cold

How is everthing at home? Are you all right??

Cheers,
Adriele


está tudo certo?

Answer 1

Resposta: Sim, está tudo correto! Irei enviar uma versão um pouco diferente, mas a maior mudança foi que a frase "we are packing now to take a walk in" teria que ter o NOW na frente do packing!

Explicação:

I'm in Santa Cantarina. I just came from Beto Carrero with my parents. We are now packing to take a walk in Foz do Iguaçu. I am very excited! I love the people here, the food and how interesting the shops are. Did you know that there is no sign here and that cars stop when there are people?  Today the weather is amazing, it's hot and windy, but the weather forecast says that on the weekend it's going to rain, and it'll get colder.

(algumas mudanças de repetição, mas no geral, seu texto está ótimo!)

Qualquer dúvida ou erro meu é só avisar :)