Question

gente,me ajudem,tenho um trabalho de inglês pra entregar amanhã,falando sobre meus planos para o futuro com o will e going to,preciso saber se botei o will e going to certo “hi guys, my name is julia,i'm in the seventh year B and i study at the college with a happy heart ,in the future i will visit my cousin who lives in bahia , i will go to a good college, gratuate and have a good job, i am going to a take trip outside Brazil with my friends or an exchange,I will to keep in touch with my friends,have my own house with my animals and i going to become fluent in english and will to get my driver's license when i turn 18 years”.

Answer 1

ta quase tudo certo! voce poderia somente colocar na frase in the future i am going to visit my cousin who lives in bahia! trocar o will por going to

e tirar o TO depois do Will na frase I WILL Keep in touch with my friends