Question

Este texto está correto ?

I get up at the usual time, got ready and waited for the bus, went to school, attended classes and when I got home I had lunch, after lunch, I studied some content for the ENEM, and went to play soccer with my friends, I went back home At 9:30 p.m., I showered and went to sleep.

Answer 1

I woke up as my usual time, got ready and waited for the bus. I arrived school, had classes and when I got home I had lunch. After lunch, I studied for the ENEM, and went to play soccer with my friends. I returned home at 9:30 p.m., took a shower and went to sleep.