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Write an essay: Why do people think that learning English is important? *
Because, in the future, those people in whom they learn the English language, have a better chance of getting a job and traveling to another country. the curriculum would be even more "full" and as a chance to get to live in other English-speaking countries.
The English language improves your memory and keeps your brain active. Another reason to learn English, perhaps unexpected, is a good memory! There is evidence to suggest that being bilingual, and even simply studying another language, can protect your brain as you get older.
Not only that, English is the "second language" of the rest of the world. Although Mandarin and Spanish have more native speakers, most people around the world choose to add English to their native language. One in five people on the planet speaks or understands at least a little English.
That's why English is one of the most useful languages you can learn. Since you can't learn all 6500 of the world's languages, at least you might be able to communicate with people from all countries speaking English,and many people like the language and learn, but others don't do it, don't “strive” but lose interest.
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Resposta:
It's important because in the future, the people who learn the English language will have a better chance at getting a job and travelling to another country. Their resume would be fuller and they would get the chance to live in other english-speaking countries.
Another reason to learn english is that learning a new language improves your memory and keeps your brain active. There is evidence that suggest being bilingual and even just studying another language can protect your brain as you get older. Not only that but English is considered a second language in many countries around the world.
Although Mandarin and Spanish have more native speakers, most people worldwide choose english as their second language. One in five people in the world speaks or understands at least a little bit of English. That's why it is one of the most useful languages that you can learn and since you can't learn all of the 6.500 languages that exist around the world, at least you might be able to communicate with people from english-speaking countries as many people like the language and strive to learn.
Explicação:
Ok eu fiz algumas modificações para deixar o texto mais próximo do natural e mais longe do google tradutor. Também modifiquei algumas partes como:
"The English language improves your memory and keeps your brain active." Falando assim parece que é só o inglês, então primeiro falei o falo que aprender uma nova lingua traz os benefícios que você colocou.
Alterei também que muitas pessoas escolhem inglês como a lingua nativa, essa não tem como alterar, mas coloquei como secundária.
Reduzi a repetição de palavras e dei uma separada nos parágrafos.
Espero que goste :D