Question

esta correto??

I was traveling with my dog ​​and my boat across the Atlantic Ocean leaves Portugal towards Brazil when suddenly a big storm appears and my boat starts to damage itself and we ended up on an unknown island.

we have been on this island for about 5 days, i am a little desperate and afraid of never leaving here. I spend most of the time looking for materials to make a shelter because the climate on this island is very irregular and going to get food from nearby places so as not to get lost.

I ask the person who finds this letter to please help me as soon as possible​

Answer 1

Resposta:

sim, parabéns pela escrita

Answer 2

Resposta: Está muito bom, mas vou fazer só algumas correções nos verbos; nada de mais. mas de resto o texto está excelente!

I was traveling with my dog ​​and my boat across the Atlantic Ocean; I left from Portugal towards Brazil when suddenly a big storm appeared and my boat started to damage itself and we ended up on an unknown island.

we have been on this island for about 5 days, i am a little desperate and afraid of never leaving here. I spend most of the time looking for materials to make a shelter (because the climate on this island is very irregular) and getting food from nearby places so I don't get lost.

I ask the person who finds this letter to please help me as soon as possible​