Question

Alguém pode me ajudar a ver se as frases estão certas?PF
É um trabalho do colegio

-The first time that the singer does a humanitarian hope was in 2013 in Haiti
-In May 2015, Beyonce travel to Haiti, participated in social programs and learned more about philanthropic activities.
-The second time was in august 2015, Beyoncé relaunched the campaign #BeyGOOD with objective of pass around the collected money from sales of Saint Damien Pediatric Hospital,also in Haiti
-#BeyGOOD is a "lightning" campaign, because lasts only 24 hours, and the ones that want to contribute or donate can access the campaign site.

Answer 1

A primeira não está certa, em vez de "does", o certo seria "did" pois apresenta data do evento que ocorreu, logo, passado simples. Mesma coisa com a segunda, onde "travel" terá de ser substituída por "traveled".