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Since young I always liked to read, I learned with mother that the books were able to take us much further. Over time I began to enjoy writing too, so chose to study journalism.

 

In my free time, I like to go to the beach and bike riding on sunny days. I like to keep moving and learning new things. Currently, for example, I'm doing a course on SEO, the Internet.

 

I always try to be a positive and humorous person. I believe that small acts of kindness make a difference in the day-to-day.

 

I am looking for an internship where you can learn and be part of a good, solid team work.

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Since I was young, I always liked to read. My mother taught me that books are able to take us further than we can imagine. In the meantime, I began to enjoy writing as well, and it made me choose to study journalism at college.

In my free time, I like to go to the beach and ride my bike on sunny days. I like to keep me moving and learning new things. Nowadays, for example, I am doing a course on SEO, the Internet.

I always try to be positive and humorous human being. I believe that little acts of kindness can change a person's whole day.

I am looking for a new chance of job, as an internship. In it, you can learn not only how to be part of a good, but also learn how to develop and be in a solid team work.