Question

alguém pode corrigir esse texto pra mim? obrigada =)

i'm reading your book and it has inspired me a lot. i wish say many things, but first, i would to say: thank you. thank you for this amazing and strong story, thanks for your strength and your fight ... i know that God put you on earth to spread His love. you are blessed. and all the people who have the chance to know you and your history, are touched by your hope, love and faith in humanity. i hope you continue with your fight and i hope that God give you many places to go, people to meet and many ways to continue with your fight for girls who need that their voices heard. i hope one day you can visit my country, where many girls - every day - are silenced by sexual abuse, where many girls for lack of education are forced early into prostitution in exchange for food and money for their family, where children doesn't have the opportunity to grow and see their chances reduced for not had a school and a teacher, only prejudice. the brazil seems to be a developed country in many ways, we seem - and are - a receptive and happy people, but our reality is very different than our football, carnival and parties show to the world. our government, at all costs, try to cover up and silent what needs to be said. all money is invested in selling to the world what we are not, or goes into the pockets of our rulers, so our children, our schools, our future is precarious and our dreams, the dreams of our girls are so small as to see them to 10 years with babies and helpless in the streets. i hope that one day someone can hear us. would be an honor to have you here and hear your testimony of victory and hope. would be an honor to have her talking for us. sorry for the english, i hope one day you can see this message. pray for our country and for our girls.

Answer 1

Esta Correto as Palavras !!! 

Answer 2

Depois de ''I would'' não é correto ter 'to',o certo seria: I would say. Eu acho que é só isso de errado.