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The city of Varginha, located in South state of Minas Gerais is known woldwide as “Terra do ET” due the large number testimonies dwellers, that count of ETs appearances or spaceships in local. And
All started in 1996, January, when a cloupe spotted a small ship shaped submarine and its exit a white smoke. The ship hadn’t noice, wasn’t illuminated and was flying slowly.
On the same day, a man saw the same ship, only now with strange noise. He accompanied the ship her to fall in the woods. When he found the local, the military was already collecting the pieces of the ship and They asked him to leave local.
Days later, the firefighters were actuated and captured new criacture and hors later, Three girls saw a strange creacture.
Caracteristics of “strange animal” was Always the same: reds eyes three horns on her head, oliy skin and brown and produced a buzz similar the bees.
Many others cases were reported in the same year and stay one question: will that the aliens really exist or are fruit of imagination?

Answer 1

The city of Varginha, located in South state of United States is known woldwide as “Terra do ET” due the large number testimonies dwellers, that count of ETs appearances or spaceships in local. And 
All started in 1996, January, when a cloupe spotted a small ship shaped submarine and its exit a white smoke. The ship hadn’t noice, wasn’t illuminated and was flying slowly.
On the same day, a man saw the same ship, only now with strange noise. He accompanied the ship her to fall in the woods. When he found the local, the military was already collecting the pieces of the ship and They asked him to leave local.
Days later, the firefighters were actuated and captured new criacture and hors later, Three girls saw a strange creacture.
Caracteristics of “strange animal” was Always the same: reds eyes three horns on her head, oliy skin and brown and produced a buzz similar the bees.
Many others cases were reported in the same year and stay one question: will that the aliens really exist or are fruit of imagination?

Answer 2

Não ,a tradução tem erros2a linha-due tothe large number of testimonies and dwellers,that count the appearance of ETs or spaceships in the local
And it all started in 1966,when a clououpe spotted a small submarine shaped ship,emitting a white smoke.The ship hadn't noticed,it wasn't illuminated and was flying slowly.
3o para.-with a strange noiseHe accompanied the ship that fell into the woods.-..
to leave the local
4o para, the firefighters were alerted and captured the new creature hours later 3 girls saw a strange creature
Charecteristics of the strange animal was always the same-red eyes,three horns on its head,brown and oily skin and producrd a buzz similar to bees,
Many other cases were reported the same year and one question was unanswered-Could aliens really exist or were they fruit of imagination?
Só corrigi as partes que o outro não corrigiu.