Question

  URGENTE...     Alguém poderia corrigir minhas frases, e destacando o erro... É pra hoje...

I look at sky every day
We go to rock concert tomorrow
My favorite pop band is Mcfly
That lake is very dirty
She likes to wear her the shorts
I am look for a new shoes 
He is watching a film over here
I go in the theater in my city

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Answer 1

4 frases estão incorretas :
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We go to rock concert tomorrow
o certo seria: we go to the rock concert tomorrow ( nós vamos para o concerto de rock amanhã)
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She likes to wear her the shorts
O certo seria : She likes to wear her shorts (Ela gosta de usar seus shorts )
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I am look for a new shoes 
O certo seria: I am waiting for new shoes ( Eu estou esperando por novos sapatos)
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I go in the theater in my city
O certo seria :I go to the theater in my city ( eu vou ao teatro na minha cidade)

Answer 2

incoreto; I AM LOOK FOR A NEW SHOES / WE GO TO ROCK CONCERT TOMORROW. correto ; I AM AWAINTIG A NEW SHOES / WE GO TO ROCK CONCERT IS TOMORROW